tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7544503628931051184.post5527302201218912787..comments2023-06-25T01:42:49.233-07:00Comments on KVH/.: KirstieBirstiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00763142454951395778noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7544503628931051184.post-29629425100067201642009-04-11T17:11:00.000-07:002009-04-11T17:11:00.000-07:00ok. here is my attemptTumbleweed, cow pies,Red rak...ok. here is my attempt<BR/><BR/>Tumbleweed, cow pies,<BR/>Red rake left in the rain. A<BR/>pasture untendedKirshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01162312296355700402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7544503628931051184.post-6111856850901949042009-04-11T13:07:00.000-07:002009-04-11T13:07:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Kirshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01162312296355700402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7544503628931051184.post-81736487426295745512009-04-11T12:51:00.000-07:002009-04-11T12:51:00.000-07:00haha actually, at least in my creative writing cla...haha actually, at least in my creative writing class, we were told we didn't need to stick to the 5-7-5 thing. We read a bunch of japanese haiku, and they don't always have the exact amount of syllables, although part of that could be the translation.Kirshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01162312296355700402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7544503628931051184.post-91338617389586076292009-04-11T01:46:00.000-07:002009-04-11T01:46:00.000-07:00tumbleweed, cow feces(okay thats six, i have to ch...tumbleweed, cow feces<BR/>(okay thats six, i have to change it)<BR/>tumbleweed, cow pies<BR/>falling farms, endless dust bowl<BR/>empty malls, rotted roads, NOW.<BR/><BR/><BR/>WOAH THAT GOT POLITICALLysehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08793404314778522363noreply@blogger.com