Today I found a start of a haiku I wrote a long time ago; I'm not sure what I was thinking. Does anyone want to take a shot at the rest of it?
Tumbleweed, cow feces
That's all I wrote. Maybe cow pies would work better. Let me know what you come up with.
4 comments:
tumbleweed, cow feces
(okay thats six, i have to change it)
tumbleweed, cow pies
falling farms, endless dust bowl
empty malls, rotted roads, NOW.
WOAH THAT GOT POLITICAL
haha actually, at least in my creative writing class, we were told we didn't need to stick to the 5-7-5 thing. We read a bunch of japanese haiku, and they don't always have the exact amount of syllables, although part of that could be the translation.
ok. here is my attempt
Tumbleweed, cow pies,
Red rake left in the rain. A
pasture untended
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